Sixteen Candles

Hey there, Ali! Great story! :D I read the first chapter, and I had to keep going - the writing really drew me in xD There were just a couple ...

Hey there Demi! Wow, this is an amazing poem that flows very well. and you can't tame the grey because it lives already The whole first stanza was pretty much ...

I don't have much to critique, but before I start, I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed that :D The murmur of quiet voices died the moment the large doors ...

I love Twilight, but I still have to say this is brilliant. I quite often enjoy reading spoofs xD No grammar mistakes that I could notice (unlike Stephenie Meyer's writing...) ...